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I could tickle the shade
on a day like today,
musky odour (I admit)
emitting from my “delicate” temple
along with my will
to make happy with
who step lightly and grin
while I drip
and drag myself onward
through what seems like concrete Sahara
While she lay in bed, she felt the breeze rush in from the open window. The curtains danced along with every gust and whip the wind took. What pleasure the night had brought her. What utter content it was to have the light of the moon hover outside, as she lay cloaked in sheets, sinking into cushion and feathers. Every inhale took her deeper under the covers, every exhale was a cuddle and a relief. The chirping crickets sang to her, or were a steady beat, keeping with the rhythm of her breath. If she could stay this way forever, she would.